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Drofgod969



Joined: 08 Sep 2008
Posts: 834

Posted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 4:49 pm    Post subject:  

very good work. i could see the camp from his view. little groosem but still very good (i like a little goosem in storys)
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Feingo Ferinton



Joined: 09 Aug 2008
Posts: 572

Posted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 4:52 pm    Post subject:  

Thank you. I'm Always glad to meet a fan. Good to meet you by the way!
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JohnnyPsycho



Joined: 08 Jul 2006
Posts: 1124

Posted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 7:18 pm    Post subject:  

Drofgod969 wrote: very good work. i could see the camp from his view. little gruesome but still very good (i like a little gruesome in storys)
Sorry, I don't usually correct other people's spelling like that (that's usually Ashton's department), but this just sort of grabbed my attention because I couldn't figure out what word you were trying to use for like a half-hour...

:oops: sorry, not the best way for me to make first impressions, I know... nice meeting you, and I'll try to keep my grammar and spelling corrections to myself from now on...
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Tadelesh



Joined: 31 Jul 2008
Posts: 595

Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2008 2:34 pm    Post subject:  

Tch. Johnny, if you're going to correct spelling and grammar, at least do it thoroughly, and mention the capitalisation of words, and the fact that the plural of story is stories. :P
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Feingo Ferinton



Joined: 09 Aug 2008
Posts: 572

Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2008 2:38 pm    Post subject:  

now stup it yous too. Dont go coreting peeple just bicuz wee cant spell. itz not nise! :lol:
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Tadelesh



Joined: 31 Jul 2008
Posts: 595

Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2008 3:04 pm    Post subject:  

Feingo Ferinton wrote: Now stop it you two. Don't go correcting people just because we can't spell. It's not nice! :lol: I couldn't help myself. :roll: It's a compulsion.
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JohnnyPsycho



Joined: 08 Jul 2006
Posts: 1124

Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2008 3:07 pm    Post subject:  

Hukt on fonix werkt fer mee!
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Tadelesh



Joined: 31 Jul 2008
Posts: 595

Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2008 3:10 pm    Post subject:  

I have no idea what the first and third words there are. :shock:
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Feingo Ferinton



Joined: 09 Aug 2008
Posts: 572

Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2008 3:11 pm    Post subject:  

I lirnd evryfing i no frum mie speek nd spll!!
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Tadelesh



Joined: 31 Jul 2008
Posts: 595

Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2008 3:14 pm    Post subject:  

Really? Everything you know? So I guess you don't know much mathematics, science, philosophy.. anything other than language? :lol: Well, I don't know what exactly a Speak and Spell teaches, as I've never actually seen one.
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JohnnyPsycho



Joined: 08 Jul 2006
Posts: 1124

Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2008 3:24 pm    Post subject:  

Tadelesh wrote: I have no idea what the first and third words there are. :shock:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hooked_on_Phonics
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Feingo Ferinton



Joined: 09 Aug 2008
Posts: 572

Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2008 3:29 pm    Post subject:  

JohnnyPsycho wrote: Tadelesh wrote: I have no idea what the first and third words there are. :shock:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hooked_on_Phonics

Johnny, I don't suppose anyone's ever told you that you use Wikipedia WAAAY too much? :lol: :lol:
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sexymanz



Joined: 25 Aug 2008
Posts: 928

Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2008 3:45 pm    Post subject:  

uh hate 2 say this (not rly) but i agree with Fenigo...
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Tadelesh



Joined: 31 Jul 2008
Posts: 595

Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2008 3:48 pm    Post subject:  

If I went around correcting everyone here's spelling and grammar in every post, I'd give myself the mental equivalent of a hernia, so don't worry about me doing it. :lol:
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sexymanz



Joined: 25 Aug 2008
Posts: 928

Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2008 3:53 pm    Post subject:  

complaining about my grammar and spelling? sorry...
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Drofgod969



Joined: 08 Sep 2008
Posts: 834

Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2008 4:32 pm    Post subject:  

hmm i didnt notice i frogot the r. meh i was up for 18 hours. also my spelling sucks. :oops:
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JohnnyPsycho



Joined: 08 Jul 2006
Posts: 1124

Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2008 4:49 pm    Post subject:  

Feingo Ferinton wrote: JohnnyPsycho wrote: Tadelesh wrote: I have no idea what the first and third words there are. :shock:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hooked_on_Phonics

Johnny, I don't suppose anyone's ever told you that you use Wikipedia WAAAY too much? :lol: :lol:
Pffft, I use Merriam-Webster Online, Google, and TV Tropes waaaay more than Wikipedia...
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Symphony



Joined: 13 Apr 2008
Posts: 581

Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2008 5:09 pm    Post subject:  

JohnnyPsycho wrote:
Pffft, I use Merriam-Webster Online, Google, and TV Tropes waaaay more than Wikipedia...
I've particularly noticed that you use the Tv Tropes one. And I've actually been looking through it a lot since. There's some funny stuff there. :)
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Crimson



Joined: 18 Aug 2007
Posts: 566

Posted: Wed Sep 17, 2008 7:01 pm    Post subject:  

So Feingo gonna have any Bon Bon member cameo's? :lol:
Love the story btw
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Feingo Ferinton



Joined: 09 Aug 2008
Posts: 572

Posted: Wed Sep 17, 2008 7:17 pm    Post subject:  

I would love to have a cameo, but I must be patient and wait for it to come to me. I'm not going to pester Madame Vanessa over something she probabky gets quite often. Patients attains the goal! :D

And I'm glad you like the story, Ol' Chap. (If you wanna read somethin else of mine, only slightly more erotic, just check out that "random talks" board. I shouldn't think you'd be dissapointed. :lol: :twisted: )
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