avatar what ya think?

[Drofgod969]

i know i am not a member yet but i will in about a week, that is when i get the money to join.(i will join even if i have to go thou hell or high water) anny whey i started this to ask people what they think of my avatar that i am going to ask to be made once i meet the requirements. also i had a little inspiration to do this from someone *elbows symphony in a playful manner*

Sorry if this is a little much but i am trying to become a dm for D&D, and well i think i got
a little carried away... Let me know if i did or not so i can edit some things so he is not so
detailed. ( I made this guy before i joined the posts so i have edited him a lot already)

Name: Deul'Dain Stronghoof (Dain for short)

Age: 22

Nationality: American, dad born in Florida with Scottish and viking descent, mother born in New York
with portorecon descent.

Profession: Mainly Blacksmith, Jewlcrafter , also a Ranger.

Species: White Mustang with silver streaks around his body.

Build: On the muscular side, with a kind of self-confident and serous posture. Also a
flat stomach. I would like him to have feet not hoofs if you don't mind. He can run as fast and
as long as regular a horse whether he is in the plains, city, or forest.

Hight: 6' 5"

Weight: 240

Hair: Mainly Silver and White with a little bit of steel grey and light grey. (From the forge.) Also
he keeps the left side down over his face (to hide a scar he got, it goes a little further down
than his head), wile the right is put behind his ear, while most just stays on his shoulders or
back.( which comes to the middle of his back) There scar is shaped like a "H" under his left eye,
(like some one was measuring his eye with a knife instead of a pensle). Also there is a scar line
from the the outside elbow of the H to a little further than the bottom of the inside vertical line.
His tail is also white, it just hangs their. he can still fling it around. it comes to the back of
his knees.

Eyes: Light-Clear cracked ice blue, with dark blue spots. (Makes you wonder what he has frozen,
and what is trying to break out.)

Cloths: Onix black suit also black dress shoes but not the shiny ones, with blood red vest, also a
silver undershirt. he also has a hat that is red (but a cylinder instead of a sphere on top) and a
coat both like greenback, but the coat is black and goes to the ankle. he doesn't always where his
coat, just when it is raining or some other cation. His tie is red with a silver and black dragon
on it. Sometime he has on his blacksmith outfit, he will be wherein a pair of brown boots, blue
wool pants, white wool full sleeve shirt, and a brown leather apron (which has slots on it for
his hammer or other items of the forge for easy acses) and brown leather gloves. also when
he is at the forge everything has some black on it (including him).

Items: There is a necklace he has on and never takes it off, it is a silver dragon sitting
on a onix with its tale around it,also with a ruby in its mouth. It goes a little past his armpit.
He also has a cain that is in truth a hidden sword. He keeps it hidden and fights withe the "cain"
until someone pulls a weapon then he shows the blade. The sheath/hilt is onix black. At the edge
part where the crack is there is a samurai sword hand guard with red and black strings for the handle.
The crack itself is nearly unnoticeable, if anny one asked what the guard is for he just says, "Its
for when my hand slips". You can tug at is all day long, hit it, bang on it and it will never
separate, but with just a flick of the wrist wile only turning the handle part it comes undone like
it was soaked in oil. At the top there is a sphere shaped blood red ruby, ruffly a little wider than
the cain. The cain comes to his hip the blade is 3' long. He is very skilled with it. Also he
keeps it in his right hand whether he is using it (which he mainly is), or just holding it. There is
a bag on his left side hip that is full of exotic and rare gems and jewels, also has his money in it
too. The bag is made of simple black leather but the tie string is made out of high density silk,
and goes around his body and ties on his right side hip. ( he unties it with his left hand still),
it looks like the old med evil coin pouches. The jewels are primarily for his swords but he can sell
some if he needs the money.
If he is has on his blacksmith outfit: he has a 10 pound rectangle hammer hanging on the apron in
its slot with other items on/in other slots of the apron.

Personality: He is the shadowy type, he stays in the back until invited over or decides to leave.
He always has a stern face. (unless he is trying to make someone feal better or he knows them very
well .When there is a fight he try's to stop it, but if one persist he knocks him out. He helps defend
the weak (unless some one else is help defending, but will still help if the defender has no chance
agensed the attacker/s). Once someome gets on his bad side is is hard for them to get on his good
side. Once you become one of his friend he will always drop what his is doing to help if there is
trouble. Once someone back stabs him they are his enemy for life (depending on what they did).
He likes to work at the forge, play chess with someone while having a drink, or sparring with
someone (if they agree to spar he doesn't force them), he also likes to read fantasy books (with a
couple of romances) when he has nothing to do. He is very good with children, he is also shy around
the women of bonbon. He is kind, honest, and try's to help when he can. He is also a Gentleman. (not
as mannered as Grey but still a Gentleman) He is not afraid to get dirty if the time arises while in
his suit. (As in mud, dirt, and what not) He lets people cry on his shoulder if they need to and also
help cheer them up. He is good with secrets because he wont tell a soul or he forgets (mainly forgets).
He remembers roughly 2/3 of the day. he has a gut feeling when he was suppose to remember something and
forgot. He will shrug off everything you call or say about him, once you bring his family into it he
will worn them only once. If they keep going the fight is on. He is a virgin and kinda hopes he will
find a girl to salve that. (One he hopes to know not just a one night stand, just know her)

Skills at his job: As a blacksmith he is very talented. He mainly dose weapons but he can still
make most everyday items no problem. He can make a unique sword that is for show in 5 days
depending on how exotic it is. Weapons that are for use only takes him about 3 to 4 days to
reforge. (5 if he has to start from scratch.) As a ranger he knows the basics (how to survive in
the wild, track animals, build a cabin that is well hidden, among other things.) as a Jewlcrafter
he is somewhat trained. he can make rings and necklace with hardly no problem. he can do the basic
circlet with not that much difficulty also. the rely exotic ones he has a problem with, not such a
big problem he cant do it. but it takes him a little time. he is also naturally skilled at doing hair.
never pursued it, but with some one to teach him a little more than what he knows he could become
very helpful to a hair stylists.

well what do you think? :oops: :?
*i wonder if i should post what i got on his past also*
sorry if the some of the punctuation are wrong and whatnot but i typed it on notepad...

[Aaron_Thom]

Sounds good to me Drofgod.

[Drofgod969]

thx :D i thought i over did it... :oops:

[sexymanz]

well i for one think its great...

[Symphony]

I think it's a good and detailed description.

And I noticed that you've asked for feet instead of hooves. I did that as well with my fursona. :)

[Drofgod969]

Symphony wrote: I think it's a good and detailed description.

And I noticed that you've asked for feet instead of hooves. I did that as well with my fursona. :)

tell ya the truth i got the idea from you. i didnt want hooves when i thout if it but i didnt know if i could ask or not till i read your description.

[Symphony]

I really didn't know if it would be okay either, so I asked Vanessa about it before I posted my description. Thankfully it wasn't a problem. :D

I hadn't really given much thought to it before my fursona. It's the first time that I've been able to request anything from an artist, so I figured that if I could choose between hooves and feet, then I'd pick feet. But I simply haven't got any idea of how many other furry fans have the same preference, and I was honestly a bit surprised when I saw it in your description.

[Drofgod969]

same. (about requesting something from a artist) this is my 1st forum that i have joined. my friend keped trying me to join one of his but i thout it would be boring... but this is anny thing but boring.

[Symphony]

I'm a little curious, why did you pick the species and the occupation that you did? And did you make this avatar for this site, or is it a character you've used somewhere else and then adapted it to Bon Bon?

[Drofgod969]

yes he is from another place. i used only the basis though. he was a Dworven Wizerd. I desided to keep his occupation the same. (Blacksmith)
as for the species, at the start i had no idea. then i decided a grey wolf, but the discarded that becose there were already plenty of wolfs. i desided to go with a horse becose of the charicter cast that is on the website (not loged in.)
my fave girl was Violet Berry ::love:: and i rememberd that she liked to meat a unicorn or pegasus. i knew there was no mythicle animles alowd so i desided to use the next thing on the list, a reguler horse.

[Symphony]

Hmm, it seems like Drake is going to get some competition then.

But I'm sure she'd love it if the two of you share her. :P



BTW, when you join, you'll get to see some really hot scenes with Violet. :wink:

[Drofgod969]

why he a blacksmith? :shock: oh man just noticed i frogot to add a proffetion :evil: (jewlcrafting)

[Symphony]

No, he's another horse with a fondness for Violet.

[Drofgod969]

:shock: well um... *blank stare*

[Symphony]

I hope I didn't make you feel disappointed. I don't think that there's a problem with the two of you being of the same species and sharing an interest in Violet. Your fursona is quite good as it is.

[Drofgod969]

ya, annt he the white horse with blind hair?

[Symphony]

Yep, that's him.

[Drofgod969]

if i recal corecly he wanted a pegasis but i think venessa (cant remember who exac) sad no.

[JohnnyPsycho]

wow, that's going waaaaaay back in time, considering how long Drake's been a regular here...

But yes, there's an embargo on fantasy creatures in BonBon, which I think is a smart decision on Vanessa's part. Besides, we have enough odd species hybrids and strangely colored animal types coming in as is...

[Drofgod969]

realy like who? from what i have seen every one is fine.