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furrynerd wrote: | i dont need to be expeceted i understand. 2 things detail and story telling with my words so im ok. whats with hoshi.[/u] | There's a difference between understand and applying. And right now, your application needs a hell of a lot of work. _________________
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Though it still needs far more work. Though you have made a little progress, it still needs work. _________________ "Nothing is so strong as gentleness. Nothing is so gentle as real strength."- From your sincere gentleman of PBB |
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i dont want to make this a big deal its aarons rp if he is ok with furry joining im not gonna bitch about it but i will say this if any one here has ever watched the pebbles and bambam show which is when pebbles is a teen ...theres this kid that hangs out with them who is horrible luck and every time he shows up things go wrong for the gang ....furry your like that guy for epic rps _________________ Star Silver
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OK guys lets calm down here. I'll admit that furrynerd has made some guff ups here and there but he has potential. Tell you guys what, furrynerd send my your post through my FA, DailenWolf, before posting it here. Let me have a look at it and then reply back what needs to be fixed. Will that work for you all? _________________ I am what I am and proud to be who I am.
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furrynerd wrote: | andrew jsut went into the house. walking through the hallways. after 10-20 minutes he didnt know how long because he doents own a watch. he meets up with everyone. but he doesnt just run in on them he sis a little tired "how is everyone" "i see my friends are around here" he looks at scorpia and says "hello nice to meet you my name is andrew wolfe" |
furrynerd wrote: | "i came from the front" :the door wasnt locked" "but i knocked before i came in so i wouldn't be rude" he sat down to relax. "dorian how are you doing buddy" his stomach was growling not that loud. he sees the stew that was made it locked so good sense he was hungry. it looks so good that her asks "is there a problem if i had a bowl of stew to eat"? "well hello to everyone im andrew wolfe" he says that to be inviting. because he thinks everyone is thinking hes rude. | Are these the kinds of posts you want in this RP, Aaron? Because I honestly cannot bare to read something like that regularly. _________________
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Ignore this post. It does not exist. It is a figment of your imagination. _________________
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ummm did i miss something or is it just me not being around that much at time's.?
if i may yes i agree that furry's rping skill's are below avrage but im just as bad as he is i meen yes i know my spelling and grammer suck and i dont put to much thought into detail.
but dont ya think this is going a little to far and yes i understand all ya point's about him sorry for saying this and i hope i havent steped on anyone's toe's. _________________ let my chains be broken so i can fly
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Look guys I don't want arguments, piss fights, or whatever. I know furrynerd can be repetive at times. Thats why I'm offering to proofread his posts first before he posts them.
That being said, furrynerd! It doesn't take much to start an FA account. You don't need to be an artist or writer. If it won't let you then try deviant art, I have an account there as well, Vailen316. Or, if you don't mind showing everyone else your post first then post it here so we can all look at it and give you pointers.
The point is I want to help you improve and I think others do to. You just have to let us help you. However, you also have to be willing to listen and take whatever ideas we throw at you.
Like I said, you have potential and trust me I've had a tendency to be repetitive in the past as well. I've improved with time and with help. So, I'm going to ask you this simple question.
Do you want me or anyone else here to help you with your writing style? Its up to you but I don't want to throw you out of the RP because of some writing problems.
I always give people chances. I hate throwing people out of situations, thats not me. But, you can't simply throw that chance away.
Now then to everyone else. I know you all might have a gripe about someone but just back off just this one time. If you see a post and it doesn't fit well then tell that person about it. It goes for me as well. If I make a post in an RP and someone tells me then I go and fix it or get rid of it and do a new post. That simple, I don't bitch, moan or complain. So if you have a problem with a post don't bitch, moan or complain about it. Just politely ask the person to change their post or give them advice on how to change it. Its that simple. If they refuse to change it then tell the person who made the post, the moderator, and he or she will take care of it. In this case that would be me. So if there is a problem then I'll take care of it and if push comes to shove then I'll ask the person to leave the post.
*Sigh* thats all I have to say about that. Now if you don't mind... I feel a little drained after this post and I'm going to go and get a drink, non-alcohol, and relax for a bit. _________________ I am what I am and proud to be who I am.
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Who's turn is it. _________________ "Nothing is so strong as gentleness. Nothing is so gentle as real strength."- From your sincere gentleman of PBB |
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*sigh* i dont have a problem with furry being here but only if he listens to advice and proofreads his posts before posting ...i always proofread my posts before putting them up _________________ Star Silver
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furrynerd wrote: | i proofread and i also spell check my post. so i wonder when its my turn. all i know is im last this might take a while. | -coughs and chokes- _________________
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furrynerd wrote: | i proofread and i also spell check my post. so i wonder when its my turn. all i know is im last this might take a while. |
I'll help you too, jigga-fur. I'm also on FA.
And, yeah my post's gonna be a punk to get to ('cuz I have a problem making to-the-point posts), but I have out-of-the-Matrix-responsibilities that trump my hobbies. Sorry, furriez! It'll be Sunday afternoon, USA Eastern Standard Time when I start typing the draft. A_T, your call on the skip, so no problema, hermano. Okay? O.k.
Peace.
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PS: Hoshi's hawt. _________________ "In Excelsis Neo."
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Liu Lu..... hhhhhhmmmmmm maybe....... _________________ "Nothing is so strong as gentleness. Nothing is so gentle as real strength."- From your sincere gentleman of PBB |
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